Project 2 Workshop Draft with Peer Commentary

Post-Workshop Revision Plan

Based on my conversations in peer review, I’ve decided to include an introduction that better summarizes the key points of Eggener and Powell, more logical paragraph placement and evidence with citations.

• Formulate a clear thesis to address my question
  • Through conferences with Amrit and Hannah, I reviewed the potential implications and restrictions of my thesis to better word an present it22
• Organize the paper to better fit the IMRAD structure
• Research for more sources of evidence, including interviews or newspaper articles