Post Conference Revision Plan as according to conferences and comments
Conference Outline:
- Introduction (here’s an ad….shared context)
- Starting position: it seems simple and this could be a bad representation…
- If we use our new way of thinking, however, the advertisement is still worth our attention [thesis]
- Eggener Summary – here is why we should be suspicious of regionalism
- The ad is bad regionalism…it’s too simple to be taken seriously
- The ad is also lying about the nativeness of the company
- Powell Summary- but maybe the contents of representation are not the only reason to value the advertisement
- The ad, seen from Powell’s perspective as opposed to that of Eggier, allows us to participate in interpreting what Detroit means.
- But maybe this isn’t as good as it looks: The gap between lyrics and video suggest the song isn’t really about local perspectives at all…
- Conclusion