Post Conference Revision Plan

Post Conference Revision Plan as according to conferences and comments

Conference Outline:

  1. Introduction (here’s an ad….shared context)
  2. Starting position: it seems simple and this could be a bad representation…
  3. If we use our new way of thinking, however, the advertisement is still worth our attention [thesis]
  4. Eggener Summary – here is why we should be suspicious of regionalism
  5. The ad is bad regionalism…it’s too simple to be taken seriously
  6. The ad is also lying about the nativeness of the company
  7. Powell Summary- but maybe the contents of representation are not the only reason to value the advertisement
  8. The ad, seen from Powell’s perspective as opposed to that of Eggier, allows us to participate in interpreting what Detroit means.
  9. But maybe this isn’t as good as it looks: The gap between lyrics and video suggest the song isn’t really about local perspectives at all…
  10. Conclusion