Workshop Draft with Peer Commentary

Since this was a webpage rather than an essay, there is no “workshop draft” because my revisions were on the same URL. However, the descriptions I provide and the according peer commentary are enough to supplement the draft.  

Workshop Draft with Peer Commentary

Post-Workshop Revision

My plan after the peer workshop is to reformat the website design to facilitate a clearer structure. In addition, I decided to reformat my original claim by stating that it is not like Fleming’s piece. This new claim was generated through further analysis and some of the questions that my peers posed during the review.

  • Conduct a survey of Dartmouth students
  • Gather quotes from students and faculty as evidence.
  • Change theme of website to best fit structure of piece
  • Organize the website by best aesthetic features