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First Draft of the Research Paper

During the first draft of my research paper, this is when I first began doing more in-depth research on the artists of Palo Alto and San Francisco. For my first draft, I focused more on the artists of Palo Alto, Greg Brown and Mohamed Soumah. I chose these two artists based on their murals, the Pedestrian Series by Brown in University Avenue and Under the Sun by Soumah in California Avenue. These are both artworks that I have personally seen, and that was my main reason for choosing them.

I knew, just from my experience viewing them, that these works were less provocative and controversial than the works in San Francisco. Often, I passed by these murals without a second glance as they seemed to blend in with the lively streets. 

Both streets are filled with locals for various reasons, mainly for a meal. I often visit University Avenue, especially if I have to go to Stanford University. The street is just a short walk away, and perfect for dinner or dessert. I’ve been to the street various times for meals, a stroll, for a college interview, and even to meet a Dartmouth alumnus. As for California Avenue, it is extremely similar; I go for a stroll or a meal. Both sunny streets are bustling with families and friends on a lazy stroll or in search of a quaint restaurant. 

I believe that both murals, harmless, playful, and positive, fit the city well. They both support the purpose of the street: for a peaceful afternoon. The art blends in a serves as a nice view for the passersby. They do not provoke but just please the eye. 

I think this is because the art is curated by the government. The city government wants to promote a safe, secure, and family-friendly setting. This has to be reflected by the art. If the art is violent or controversial, it would disturb the peace and happiness of the city. 

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