Because this was a webpage, I don’t have a workshop draft because I made my revisions on the exact same URL. However, the descriptions I provide in the link below and the according peer commentary is a fair representation of the content in my workshop draft.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UTbZR2SvvAacPszLCctsWx-tf1-KXdX7uN6PByH3YeQ/edit?usp=sharing

This comment was also included in the feedback:

Hi Amrit! Great start so far. I checked out your website and i can really see the beginning of a cohesive argument and logical structure. You might also want to capture a few pictures of the top f the hop from the outside perspective. Let me know if you want any additional feedback. -Paulomi