Links to my definitional text:
Part 1: https://www.powtoon.com/online-presentation/cKaOurPzc8y/?mode=movie#/
Part 2: https://www.powtoon.com/online-presentation/fNQw0ey2PRy/?mode=movie#/
The files documenting the creation of my definitional text.
Links to my definitional text:
Part 1: https://www.powtoon.com/online-presentation/cKaOurPzc8y/?mode=movie#/
Part 2: https://www.powtoon.com/online-presentation/fNQw0ey2PRy/?mode=movie#/
Definitional Text Script Draft: Definitional Text Script
Cover Letter Draft: Definitional Text Draft
Commentary:
“I think your script will help your viewer make sense of your text. If you’re still revising, consider how the places (like the first section) in which you define you term (privacy) with a variant of your term (private). This may not produce as much clarity as you would like. Further, your opening section is the least specific. Consider cutting this down to get more quickly to your specific examples.”
-Megan McIntyre
“-Formalize & state your definition at some point
-Talk about how the use of examples (ISIS, Twitter, etc) contributed to your definition. Maybe say that internet privacy should be looked at in terms of modern examples, and that it is a modern phenomenon”
-Robert Livaudais
Definitinal Text Pre-Draft Outline/Info: Definition Text Info