Peer Review

9 thoughts on “Peer Review

  1. Hi Leandra!
    I just wanted to leave a comment to give you some feedback! I think your oral history project is really coming along great! I like the simplicity of it (not a lot of menus and pictures). I know that you are still working, so I would just suggest to add more quote boxes or pictures to some of the later chapters. I think your project is organized very well. I think an introduction that will be added later will be helpful for giving the reader a glance of what Cristian’s oral history is about. I’d also like to suggest to add voice, although I know that maybe a problem if you are using a pseudonym for this oral history. I really like all the pictures that you are using in the text. The new cover photo is pretty awesome (Its from my NAS 30 class that I had this past term)! Please let me know if you have any questions! Great work!

  2. Hi Leandra, I think this is a really nice start. I would encourage you to work on reorganizing your prose so that you keep your ideas together (re: space, time, etc.) to improve flow. This will greatly improve the quality of the narrative. The design of the page and photographs work well. I look forward to your final project. For now, check the comments that I have peppered throughout your wordpress page.

  3. Hola Leandra, por alguna razón llegué a esta página para leer tu experiencia viviendo en Ann Arbor.

    Soy argentino y en Agosto de este año empezaré mi Doctorado en Economía en UMichigan. Sería de gran ayuda saber de otra gente que ha vivido allí.

    Dejo mi mail para poder contactarnos eventualmente. No encontré el tuyo para poder escribirte directamente.

    Saludos,
    Emilio

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