My revision plan consists of three main parts. First, I realize I need to clarify my main idea statement in the opening paragraph and use it to introduce the layout of my essay. I also want to add a paragraph or two about BitTorrent and how alternative types of piracy affect HBO (in addition to live streaming and file sharing). As my essay is currently, I don’t fully lay out my organization of ideas until about mid-way through the essay, so I need to move that up to the beginning and then build upon it accordingly.